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PostSubject: The Daemon Seaman (poem)   The Daemon Seaman (poem) Icon_minitimeWed Feb 06, 2008 7:30 am

Where there is arrogance in Heaven,
There is humbleness in Hell.
I'll see you on the River Styx where I will bid thee farewell.
Drink up, my friends, to my final quest.
To feed the hungry belly of life's great unrest.

The boatman takes me southwards
To my retirement in the fire.
An ancient smile of pleasure cracks as I burn upon my pyre.
Drink up, my friends, for my last breath.
Held only in my lungs, to shout in the face of death.

The devil saves a seat for me
At the place beside his throne,
Where I can watch the daemon eating and getting fat alone.
Drink up, my friends, to the meeting place of fate.
My last port as admiral, as captain or mate.

I leave 'cross vast mountains of bone and ash,
Breathing the sulphur breeze.
Content because unlike life, Hell will never freeze.
Drink up, my friends, let's drink until I die.
For six more ales and pipes to smoke, and it's Hades I will lie.

Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil pirate Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil pirate Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil

(- bored at work. Decided to try a poem using that quote I made up for my signature.)
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PostSubject: Re: The Daemon Seaman (poem)   The Daemon Seaman (poem) Icon_minitimeThu Feb 07, 2008 2:27 am

V. cool! Me likey! Twisted Evil
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PostSubject: Re: The Daemon Seaman (poem)   The Daemon Seaman (poem) Icon_minitimeSat Feb 09, 2008 5:07 pm

Quite a fun waste of time... May do that again someday...
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PostSubject: Re: The Daemon Seaman (poem)   The Daemon Seaman (poem) Icon_minitimeSun Feb 10, 2008 7:45 am

Absolutely brilliant - more boring times to fill, please!!! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The Daemon Seaman (poem)   The Daemon Seaman (poem) Icon_minitimeTue May 06, 2008 7:44 am

Author! Author! Brilliant. as LunarCraft said more boring times to fill !!! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: The Daemon Seaman (poem)   The Daemon Seaman (poem) Icon_minitimeTue May 06, 2008 1:40 pm

Hehehe. I'm not great at critiquing poetry, and even worse and understanding it (especially if it's all cryptic) but I think I at least got the ale part of that! Muchly good. (Also supporting some kind of encore...)
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PostSubject: Re: The Daemon Seaman (poem)   The Daemon Seaman (poem) Icon_minitimeTue May 06, 2008 5:16 pm

I don't get it (which isn't strange: I suck at understanding poetry!) but seriously, it sounds brilliant!! I like it, and I hate poems!! Ask anyone!! lol

Thanks for that Danny, utter legend....wanna be dubbed "Forum Time Spender"? Razz

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PostSubject: Re: The Daemon Seaman (poem)   The Daemon Seaman (poem) Icon_minitimeWed May 07, 2008 1:13 am

Cheers guys Laughing !
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