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PostSubject: 4 elements: poem 2- Fire   4 elements: poem 2- Fire Icon_minitimeThu Nov 08, 2007 6:10 pm

Fire

The burning candle is an effigy.
A representation of allegory.
The time it takes for it to burn.
A parable that we to must turn.

The warmth and passion of our feyness
nature teaches, lessons tame us
Fire light will lead the way
through pain toward a brighter day

Visions stitched upon our fate
have woven through our angry spate
sensations gone have led us blinded
Into arms of those misguided

A journey's warmth it does promote
our chance to leave a cosmic footnote
there is no soul that endured perdition
that held flame close in each transition

So be true to southern gardians of fire
Their protection in line with your desire
A mind kept well in this respect
A soul worthy to reflect...

copyright 2007 Matthew Richards

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PostSubject: Re: 4 elements: poem 2- Fire   4 elements: poem 2- Fire Icon_minitimeFri Nov 09, 2007 2:11 am

Again, Matthew - very powerful words indeed and I appreciate the intent, even though fire is not my element in any way
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PostSubject: Re: 4 elements: poem 2- Fire   4 elements: poem 2- Fire Icon_minitimeFri Nov 09, 2007 2:23 am

Beautiful Matt
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PostSubject: Re: 4 elements: poem 2- Fire   4 elements: poem 2- Fire Icon_minitimeTue Nov 13, 2007 9:21 am

This is my favourite [not surprising as fir is myh element] The words are so power, and beautiful
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